Josh is not happy with these posts.
Have you tried:
1) one of a little figure with a thought bubble and in the bubble a thought about Florence.
2) one where you combine a photo with the text.
3) One where you fill up the page with one story
4) one where it is a quiet white page with one beautiful, thoughtful statement about Florence.
I am not sure it should read like the game. If so, how about taking a photo of an actual facebook post and turning that into a postcard. The cropping could turn that fragment into a beautiful image too.
Other thoughts... Let's see what Sarah did.
Oh no, I meant the other two I made that I did not post. I like the idea about departing it from the game. I will tweak. I just don't want these to look like hallmark cards. Anyways, I will continue to work on some and post again tonight.
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